wait4you.diaryland
13 November 2005 / 12:47 am
First Impression: [3 / 5]
ARGHHH, it’s going to be a preppy happy-go-lucky annoying COW, glad you aren’t (happy-go-lucky diaries are ALWAYS boring). I HATE usernames with letters in them, but if you like it then it’s your choice. The layout is red, and I HATE the colour red.
Design: [19.5 / 25]
I don’t really like the layout, however it does seem to suit you and the picture is kind of cute. I really like the stars, I didn’t realise that they where there to start with. It’s neat and organised and the colours all go together well, which is always good. It’s not my cup of tea but if you like it . . .
Composition: [49.5 / 50]
Love. Don’t worry about it I don’t and I’m older than you. At least the first guy you actually really and I mean REALLY like and though you had a chance with didn’t decide that he rather go out with one of your best friends, or do you? I write all this and then read more and get confused, if this has happened to you I feel you pain. Now I’m confused, have you had a boyfriend or not?
You seem to talk a lot about getting a boyfriend, I’m sure that you’ve head this a million times before but don’t stress so much about it, involve yourself a hobby, take up a sport just do something to take your mind off of the fact that you don’t have a boyfriend. That’s what I do and I’ve found that it works pretty well for me, so it might just for you as well. “She’s so happy, you’ve got to be happy for her” this totally helped me relate to who you are and what you’re going through.
I did honestly enjoy reading about you life. You wrote the way you feel and you didn’t try to write emotion you just wrote it and it came out beautifully, points to you for constantly being able to do that.
I am so reliving the beginning of this year when you talk about your homecoming (I had my year 11 ball earlier this year). I wish I could write like you.
[I’ve only taken the extra 0.5 off you score because I always believe that there is room for improvement, even if something seems to be perfect.]
Contact: [5 / 5]
Guestbook, notes, email, AIM, tagboard, and yay it isn’t on the Nav. bar.
Navigation: [5 / 5]
Easy to find, easy to use.
Grammar / Spelling / Vocabulary: [5 / 5]
No internet slang and no spelling / grammar errors that I could find.
Bonus: [4.5 / 5]
Bio, credits (that is kinda of cute), dream journal,
Score – [91.5 / 100]
Favourite quote:
“From teen depressant to ordinary girl who's not so ordinary...and liking it.
I may not be perfect, and I may make mistakes, but through the end I'll be okay. Because everything's okay in the end. If it's not okay, then it's not the end.”
Last thoughts / further comments:
I’m definitely come back for more. Also, the only things you really lost marks for was first impression and layout, basically just the colour (my personal pref. and stuff). Otherwise, absolutely fantastic.